Friday, 2 May 2014

MASTERY PATTERNS FROM NEWSPAPERS


Taken from reports in national newspapers

Pattern 364

The campaign was aimed to stop the spread of TB.

It was also aimed to educate young people of the dangers.

 

The campaign was aimed to stop the spread of TB and educate

young people of the dangers.

 

Pattern 365

 

The policeman became infamous on the social media

He caused serious injuries to his wife.

 

The policeman became infamous on the social media

having caused serious injuries to his wife.

 

Pattern 366

 

The topics covered peer education.

It included sexuality and social health.

It included relationships and family planning.

 

The topics covered peer education and included

sexuality, social health, relationships and family planning.

 

The topics covered peer education including sexuality,

social health, relationships and family planning.

 

Pattern 367

 

He said his priorities are to serve the people.

His priorities are not to deliver cash

The cash would be to buy tinned fish and rice.

 

He said his priorities are to serve the people

not to deliver cash to buy tinned fish and rice.


Pattern 368

 

Peer education is to pass information to young people.

Then they can make informed decisions about their lives.

 

Peer education is to pass information to young people so that

they can make informed decisions about their lives.

 

Peer education is to pass information to young people to enable

them to make informed decisions about their lives.

 

Pattern 369

 

I am calling on the children of Motu, Koitabu and Koiari.

I want them to mobilize.

I want them to get together.

I want them to challenge the Government.

This is for the benefit of the people.

They are now slaves in their own land.

 

I am calling on the children of Motu, Koitabu and Koiari.

to mobilize, get together and challenge the Government.

for the benefit of the people who are now slaves in their

own land. (Post Courier 30 April 2014)

 

Pattern 370

 

Huge acres of land were bought by the colonial administration.

They were bought with axes, knives and tobacco.

People from other parts of the nation are benefiting.

The Motu, Koitabu and Koiari are suffering.

 

Huge acres of land were bought by the colonial administration.

with axes, knives and tobacco with people from other parts of

the nation benefiting while the Motu, Koitabu and Koiari are suffering.


Pattern 371

 

Our great grandparents were uneducated villagers.

They had no knowledge whatever

They did not know what was happening.

 

Our great grandparents were uneducated villagers with

no knowledge whatever of what was happening.

 

Pattern 372

 

Traditional landowners must be fairly compensated.

They must be given justice.

I refer to people of Motu, Koiari and Koitabu in particular.

 

Traditional landowners must be fairly compensated

and  given justice, particularly the people of Motu, Koiari

and Koitabu.

 

Pattern 373

 

Millions of kina are spent on city roads.

The quality of maintenance is poor.

The contractors are not accountable.

 

Millions of of kina are spent on city roads

but quality of maintenance is poor and yet

contractors are not accountable.

 

Millions of of kina are spent on city roads

with quality of maintenance poor and  

contractors  not accountable.

 

Pattern 374

 

She was speaking at the graduation.

She congratulated the graduates

She told them to be committed, honest and loyal.

 

Speaking at the graduation, she congratulated the

graduates telling them to be committed, honest and loyal.

 

Speaking at the graduation, she congratulated graduates

and told them to be committed, honest and loyal.

 

Pattern 375

 

A million pilgrims were expected.

Thousands could be seen.

They were camped around the Vatican.

They were sleeping in folding chairs.

They were praying in silence.

They were singing hymns.

 

A million pilgrims were expected with

thousands seen camped around the Vatican

sleeping in folding chairs, praying in silence

and singing hymns.

 

Pattern 376

 

Polish faithful danced around the fountains.

Pilgrims attended vigils.

They were waiting for the ceremony.

It was seen to unite Catholics.

 

Polish faithful danced around the fountains

while pilgrims attended vigils waiting for the

ceremony seen to unite Catholics.

 

Pattern 377

 

His Government has expelled American diplomats.

He rebuffed a trade deal with Washington.

He accused the US of aggression.

 

His Government has expelled American diplomats,

rebuffed a trade deal with Washington and accused

the US of aggression.

 

His Government has expelled American diplomats,

rebuffed a trade deal with Washington while accusing

the US of aggression.

 

Pattern 378

 

An Egyptian court sentenced Islamist supporters.

They were sentenced to prison terms.

The terms ranged from 5 to 88 years.

 

An Egyptian court sentenced Islamist supporters.

to prison terms ranging from 5 to 88 years.

 

Pattern 379

 

The Indian premier is trailing in election polls.

He has suffered another blow.

His brother is supporting the Hindu opposition.

 

The Indian premier is trailing in election polls.

having suffered another blow with his brother

supporting the Hindu opposition.

 

Pattern 380

 

India test fired a new missile.

It was capable of destroying incoming rockets.

It had first been test fired from a naval ship.

 

India test fired a new missile capable of destroying

incoming rockets having first been test fired from a

naval ship.


Pattern 381

 

Police have hit out at people.

They have been spreading false information.

It is about the survey.

It has forced the closure of schools.

 

Police have hit out at people, spreading false

Information about the survey that has forced

the closure of schools.

 

Pattern 382

 

Purchasing the two generators was a short term solution.

The long term solution would be to expand power station capacity

Another solution would be to build a power station at Brown River.

 

Purchasing two generators was a short term solution while

the long term measure would be to expand power station capacity.

and build another at Brown River.

 

Purchasing the two generators was a short term solution with

the long term solution to expand power station capacity.

and build another at Brown River.

 

Pattern 383

 

The group is made up of police and army personnel

The Deputy Commissioner said this.

 

The group is made up of police and army personnel

according to the Deputy Commissioner.

 
Pattern 384

 

Use of cell phones has contributed to development.

There has been increased communication

Information can be passed quickly.

A research report has shown.

 

Use of cell phones has contributed to development.

with increased communication and information passed

quickly according to a research report.

 

Pattern 385

 

There has been the introduction of competition in mobile phones.

Coverage has been extended greatly.

Social welfare has been improved in isolated clans.

 

There has been the introduction of competition in mobile phones

with coverage extended greatly and social welfare improved  in

isolated clans.

 

With introduction of competition in mobile phones, coverage has

been extended greatly and social welfare improved in isolated clans.

 
Pattern 386

 

Not every location has electricity.

People walk long distances.

They get their phones charged.

 

Not every location has electricity with people walking long

distances to get their phones charged.

 

Pattern 387

 

Three types of savings products are made available.

These are made available particularly for women.

These include regular savings, dream savings and skulfi savings


 
Three types of savings products are offered made available

particularly for women and include regular savings, dream

savings and skulfi savings

 

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